I think my learning this semester is qualified as an adventure in Joseph Campbell's terms because im learning a lot of things that I wouldn't have learned in my normal classes. As Dr. Preston said, we dont learn copying off textbooks and just remembering it to pass a quiz. I'm glad that I chose this opportunity because, with the things im learning right now, I probably would have never learn it in the future.
I like your writing but instead of saying, "Like Dr. Preston said..." use "As Dr. Preston said..." and then a comma after "...I chose this oppurtunity because..." but other than that it was fine, i liked it!
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